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Old 08-18-2009, 02:13 PM   #1
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Finally did a track, my girl RiZ-neTTe on the hook.

Have U Eva?

Any n all feedback appreciated

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Old 08-18-2009, 05:23 PM   #2
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i can dig it homie... shit was not wack, it had that laid back mid 90's vibe to it... i'd like to hear more from you... only thing i'd say is some parts were a lil jumbled... cut down on your syllable count...
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Old 08-18-2009, 05:33 PM   #3
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good stuff, i'd agree with mig on the occasional jumbledness tho...still dope
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Old 08-18-2009, 05:33 PM   #4
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i felt like the vocals were too low in the mix. sounded dece though.
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Old 08-18-2009, 06:20 PM   #5
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Thanks on all the feedback, i deff. found when i listened to it on headphones vocals sounded a lot lower than on speakers so i'll turn that up. N i think i'll take the other advice and lower syllable count so i dont have to rush anything and re-record. Props again!
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^yeah next time you mix, listen on your main speakers, your headphones, and through as many other speakers as possible. it'll give you the best representation of your mix and help you find the problem areas a lot easier. the idea is to have the mix sound balanced on every set of speakers.
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I remastered this track finally, any feedback appreciated as usual
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